In getting ready for the PB Academy for the coming conference, I have been looking for advice so I can provide helpful feedback, especially when the work is in verse. A member of my critique group recommended this by Kelly Ramsdell Fineman as a very useful, easy to understand explanation. I found it on the web-site of Cynthea Lui called Writing for Teens and Children
http://www.writingforchildrenandteens.com/guest-articles/how-to-crtitique-rhyming-childrens-poems/
http://www.writingforchildrenandteens.com/guest-articles/how-to-crtitique-rhyming-childrens-poems/
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More by Kelly Ramsdell Fineman can be found at http://kellyrfineman.livejournal.com/